Planning - Initial Ideas Pitch

With my pitch I wanted to get the feedback from my peers on my ideas.   In order to do this we created a focus group and presented our ideas individually or as groups.  We then talked about the different ideas, getting feedback so that we can improve. It was very useful as they provided additional ideas to my original and told me how I could improve.  It left me with a wider idea of what idea i wanted to go with and how I could improve it.  Below the video is attached containing my pitch to the rest of the focus group, along with their feedback.